Friday, 29 March 2019

22A Elevator Pitch #3


1. https://youtu.be/I6JStCUxsG4

2. I was really surprised on the feedback that I was given.  I didn't think I had improved my elevator speech as much as everyone said I did and I was really happy to see that people thought that I had become more dynamic and fluid. 

3. I changed the beginning of my pitch from the feedback that I was given and began with a story that a lot of students like myself could relate to.  Hopefully it made my message more effective.
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2 comments:

  1. Spencer Harvey31 March 2019 at 22:50

    Kyle,
    Your pitch was better this time than your last one! You spoke very clearly, and were easy to understand. You also looked confident while speaking to the camera. You seem to be excited about your idea, and you looked comfortable speaking.

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  2. David Lee1 April 2019 at 19:34

    Kyle,
    I liked that you started off with a story that people could see themselves a part of. Also, putting that dollar value of the items they could lose is a powerful measure because people are naturally risk averse meaning they take more action if there is a possibility of loss rather than gain. Overall nice pitch and I think if you keep practicing a bit more you'll have it down perfectly.

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